First day back at school,
On February the 1 of 2021 it was the first day back at school. I finally met everyone. The first person I talked to out of my friends was Iola.
I said to Iola, “Hi Iola”
Iola said back, “Hi Foli”.
Iola I sat and talked and then we met the new teacher named Mr O’Brian.
Mr O’Brian said “Good Morning, what is your name’s?
Iola and I replied
“my name is Iola
and my name is Foli ''.
Iola and I talked with Mr O’brian for quite a while, after that we talked with friends.
Well done Foli, you have used the speech marks well to show when people are using dialogue. Is this a new skill that you have learnt? I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
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